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A scary night
A scary night
It was a sunny day and the weather was so fine. As usual, my brother and i went out to have fun. We started playing football from 11 am to 6 pm, and then we got home because the sun was going down. Now, it was 8 pm, the time for us to eat our dinner. The whole family was gathered around the table enjoying very good meals and minerals while talking. All of a sudden, we heard a strange and scary noise coming from outside. My father stood up and went out to see what was going on, he came back after few minutes and assure us that everything was okay. Then we finished our meals and after brushing our teeth, me and my brother went to bed. When i was about to sleep, i saw a shadow near the window, but it was a shadow not like others. I was so scared that i got up as fast as i could to wake my brother up and showed him what i was seeing. The shadow seemed to come toward us, i grabbed my brother's hand and started to cry while praying. It was so terrifying. Finally, that shadow faded away and the wind started to blow constantly and the leaves were falling down from the tree outside. Like a flash, the shadow of that strange "monster" appeared and disappeared in front of us. I tried to walk out the door in order to look for help but it suddenly closed, so i just turned around and saw, behind my brother, the devil himself. I don't really know how to describe him because he was so distorted, with his ugly face and huge body, he was like Goliath but in his ugly and nasty version. I wanted to scream out but i was so petrified that i couldn't even open my mouth. The monster caught my brother by the neck and took him out. In the garden outside, the monster laid my brother down, raised a hoe and told him to make his last prayer coz he was about to be killed, and after this short moment, the monster cut my brother's head and threw his corpse into the outside pool. The blood spread everywhere and turned the blue light color of the water into deep red. The monster was in laugh because for him he just achieved his first "task". Then he looked at me and made a sign to say i was the next on his list and started to walk toward me and me i was there, unable to move, i think i was paralysed. Few minutes later, the devil was near me and i still was there. He caught me and when he was about to kill me, i suddenly felt stronger, just like if i had got the power of a superhuman. With that power i was finally able to fight down the monster, but what i did first was to put my parents in safe and make sure they're okay. After that i came back to the monster but he was no longer there. I was anxious, not for me but for my fathers and our neighbours. The wind rudely blew one more time like in thrillers, and the devil was back and ready to fight against me. The fight was rude and bloody but i finally fought him down. After killing the monster, peace came back in our house but i unfortunately lost my brother. I wish he could be there with me
© Koffi ERIC,
книга «Fright night».
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Екатерина Беспалова
A scary night
Quite an interesting story 👍💪🔥 I feel sorry for his brother😶😑but without that victim the hero would not become strong...
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2019-11-11 20:48:05
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JENOVA JACKSON CHASE
A scary night
It's good...you should continue
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2019-11-12 20:47:30
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Ciril Le pen
A scary night
Cool
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2020-08-30 23:24:18
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