Breath, in and out, in and out. I'm sitting here on a... Well, I don't know? All I know is that it is cold and dark and that I'm stuck in a drain pipe. You know the ones in your yard. I've been here for a week total, and that is based on when I fall asleep. Well, here is how I need up here.
      I was waiting at the park when my boyfriend finally showed up. 30 minutes late, figures. But this time was different. He reeked of alcohol. It smelled like he took a shower in it. It was that bad. I looked at him and said ," Why do u smell like you took a bath in liquor?" He looked at me with unfocused eyes and tried to smile. He just ended up screwing up his face though. He said, " I only had one shot.." he tried winking at me but it was a total fail. He tried to lean in for a kiss but I quickly pushed him away, " you know how I feel about drinking David. Why would you do that? You said you thought it was a horrible thing to do too."   He looked like a wounded  puppy and said, " come on baby, I tried it and I like it. Maybe you should try it too."  U shook my head, " no! I have seen what it does to people. I'm not going to deal with that. You know what, I'm going home. We can meet tomorrow or so.ething when you haven't been drinking." And with that, I walked off. We met six times, talked on the phone 10 times. And all those times he was drunk. One day, I told him I was going to break up with him. He was saying some very hurtful words to me.  He apologized and asked to meet at the park the next day. I agreed.
     The next day I walk into the park and there he is sitting on the bench with yet, another beer can. I marched right up to him and snatched it out of his hands and threw it. when I tried around  I felt a hand snap across my face. the pain brought tears to my eyes. I looked at him holding my cheek. he jabbed a finger in my face and said , " who do you think you are?" I gathered up my courage and said what I've been dying to say " Im breaking up with you." the look on his face still gives me the shivers. he started pushing me and yelling at me until finally he pushed a little too hard and I fell..... right into a drain pipe.  I remember pain, then nothing. a d when I woke up. there was no pain. only concern on how in the world was I going to get out.


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also this is not a true story, it is total fiction.
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Katie Black