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WELCOME TO THE CRUISE!!!
Your tasks are all aboard over here on this cruise.
Your grandmother booked this cruise specially for you all
WE LOVE OUR GRANDMOM
SHE'S THE BEST....everrrrrrrr
okay okay ..said dinesh
Well well looks like your late enough to start up with your tasks.So we will start from tommorow till then rest.
i will show you all your rooms.
OMG THIS IS GONNA BE FUN.
Remember and think nicely and clearly if you dont complete your tasks your inheritence will be given to your cousins Abby,Voilet and Sam. Really,Seriously,Thats not fair at all Mr.Dinesh Said The three of them together.It is ,But if you dont complete your tasks.
Thats my left hands play? said alex.
Its not that easy said Dinesh.
My eyes are closing-said David.
Yeah sorry you all go to sleep.
7A is rose's room 7B Davids and 7C alex's.You all got services if you need anything then just call me this is my number............ .
Your tasks are all aboard over here on this cruise.
Your grandmother booked this cruise specially for you all
WE LOVE OUR GRANDMOM
SHE'S THE BEST....everrrrrrrr
okay okay ..said dinesh
Well well looks like your late enough to start up with your tasks.So we will start from tommorow till then rest.
i will show you all your rooms.
OMG THIS IS GONNA BE FUN.
Remember and think nicely and clearly if you dont complete your tasks your inheritence will be given to your cousins Abby,Voilet and Sam. Really,Seriously,Thats not fair at all Mr.Dinesh Said The three of them together.It is ,But if you dont complete your tasks.
Thats my left hands play? said alex.
Its not that easy said Dinesh.
My eyes are closing-said David.
Yeah sorry you all go to sleep.
7A is rose's room 7B Davids and 7C alex's.You all got services if you need anything then just call me this is my number............ .
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2018-04-08 13:20:53
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Great story idea, but your spelling and grammar is really distracting. Can't always tell what you're trying to say, and it gives a weird tone to the narrative. Maybe get someone to proofread your work
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2018-04-08 13:28:47
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@Åskar Wilson @ÅsThanks,I will try to improve.more and more
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2018-04-10 09:50:05
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