Different Barriers

Lorraine

Were far apart,but we still keep each other's heart. Hearts were torn,but love is born Forgetting the past,would last a relationship fast. Cause you cross the line,now it means you need to go back to the time. Broken memories could make you cross your time. Advantages is really need in line.

2018-10-04 08:40:24

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deadone

I did like the ryme but i did not understand it ... and if i like it when i dont understand it ...it will demean ur poem.. but if u have the time .. i would love to understand this poem.

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I saw a dream, and there were you, And there was coldness in your eyes. I wonder what a kind of true Made you become as cold as ice. And later I looked back to get a sense This empty glance was hellish call of past. It used to be a high and strong defense Against the world, the pain and me at last. You looked at me, and peering in your soul, I felt so lonely, as something vital died. And that is what I fear most of all - That nothing gentle will remain inside. Inside of you. Inside of me as well. And nothing will be said to farewell.

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Не скажу "люблю"

Asteriya

Знаєш, складно Тебе любити й не сказати. Тебе кохати і збрехати, Що зовсім іншого люблю, І що до тебе не прийду. Знаєш, той "інший" мене теплом своїм зігріє. Зачарує і поцілує, А ти сиди там далі сам, І йди назустріч виючим вітрам. Тобі вже більше не скажу своє я болісне "люблю"... А просто відпущу і почуття у собі похороню.

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