The Comeback
(short story) "Be careful with who you trust." ♣️♣️♣️ He let out a wicked laugh. "Do you think I care about you? Look around! Open your blind eyes! Can't you see people don't care about you! They don't like you!" He exclaimed acridly. His words cut through me, but I didn't cry. Not when he was looking. I let him leave first before running away. Crying. I ran through the woods. Scaring all the animals away. My legs was starting to get soared yet I didn't stop. I looked back through all of the times I've helped someone. Did they return the favor? Did they know when I needed one? No. They didn't. They never did. Before continuing being consumed by my own thoughts, I found a rock where I could sit down. I cried, shouted all the hurt that I felt. I cared too much...too much that nobody was able to give it back. Too much...he was right. Nobody cared. I'm not being a suicidal person. And I'm not that naive either. I know that there were people who are evil inside and out. For all of these years, I tried to protect them before my own, but for once just once can't they do it? Don't they get the meaning of gratitude? Generousity? Wiping my tears, I held my head up high and smiled. It wasn't a happy one. It was a mischievous smirk. I was done, I'm tired. I've learned my lesson. Guards up, and hardly have any mercy for others. Be ready everyone because I'm back stronger than before. ♣️♣️♣️ -PJS Please do tell me your feedbacks!
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alvahmara
I'm planning to write this in my book
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2018-11-21 13:49:32
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Rocqueville
It takes an amazing amount of strength to stand up for yourself when the people you thought were going to hold you don't .Most people don't understand that till they actually go through it
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2018-11-21 14:03:08
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alvahmara
Thank you I'm planning
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