Survivor
Lethando Katane
For one to be branded with such tag means one must be one tough, bad cookie. See the world loved us but the people never did. Being a survivor is one phenomenal honour and it's not for the faint-hearted. It's for the law breakers and the rule makers! You don't just wake up in the morning and claim you are one, you gotta fight and kill to be ONE! BRAVERY AND BOLDNESS are survivors essential daily food, assertiveness is their air. Their bodies bare marks of VICTORY, each scare has a LEGENDARY story. For me a survivor is simply a walking tall kinda like ghost that lives to tell an intriguing yet atrocious unforeseen journey.
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deadone
I believe that we are all here to learn and improve . If u dont mind i will tell u a few things that can help u improve our poetry. 1. Ur concepts are beautiful, but try to maintain a flow in what u write ..as it is a poem it has to hve a flow. 2. To reach larger crowds u need to make ur language simpler so that they dont have to refer a dictionary. Otherwise this is a very beautiful poem. Looking forward for more
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2018-09-16 17:43:24
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Lethando Katane
@deadone Thank you very much 😊 it's much appreciated. I needed it. Will make sure I improve and impress
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2018-09-17 10:38:26
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deadone
@Lethando Katane i am eagerly awaiting.
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2018-09-17 11:39:48
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و مَا الّذي يجعلُ مصطلحُ الوردة قبِيحة؟ -مَا الّذي تنتظرهُ من وردةٍ واجهت ريَاح عاتية ؛ وتُربة قَاحلة و بتلَاتٍ منهَا قَد ترَاخت أرضًا ، مَا الّذي ستصبحهُ برأيك؟
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