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I am new to this writing community. I am a silly teenager and I don't write very well. Yet I hope there is room for improvement :p.
I read some amazing poems and stories here. I hope I'll be a better writer and make some friends.
I would love some feedback on my work..
Thank you
♥♥♥ with love.
-Blue
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Capsize
You've only said your goodbyes,
Why do I see a knife drawn through your skin?
Capsize,
And you always sink.
Hopes don't bring tranquility,
Hoping that you're alright isn't good enough for me.
I am scared of what I see,
I watch you break, as the waves break at your feet.
This one is an ugly product of premonition,
Tell me,for how long have we induced your inhibitions?
Yesterday his canavas was lavander and the red on her dress was spilt love,
Today you see violent streaks of bruises and stains of blood.
Tomorrow I'll let you pretend that you've lost your mind.
So we lay in the sand and never open our eyes.
Chase the winds, watch it fade away,
You'll cut the ropes and flee anyway
I don't know you, i can't know you anymore
But won't you search for a safer shore?
There will always be something to make you bleed beneath your skin,
I hope there is a capsize and you don't sink.
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Not today
Your love is not invincible.
The tension is invisible,
But it is heavy,
so feel it.
I know you don't love me, not today.
Maybe tomorrow when you wake up, you don't have to say,
Say it over and over again, when you see I can't help but break.
Don't tell me that you need me. I know you dont, not today.
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Remember
Remember, remember, remember, remember:
7 contininents and 26 letters.
Seven, eight, nine and ten.
Count the seconds and the night would end.
Close your eyes, but don't get scared
You can't count darkness, so count the monsters instead.
Open your eyes.
Can you feel them staring at your wreck?
Watch them hanging tags around their necks.
Today they'll teach you to trade stars for dreams and innocence.
Oh don't you remember we have none left,
Maybe we had nothing to begin with.
Remember, remember, remember, remember.
7 days and 60 seconds
Oh did you find something new,
The cover reads 'FRIEND' but you don't have a clue.
There is mere sympathy inside, and it will drain away,
And when pure defiance find its ways.
Then you have nothing left to know,
Just count your friends as they come and go.
Remember,remember,remember,remember.
7 seas and
Seasons changed,
Too much to take.
A wildfire comes your way.
You can't save me now.
Coloured ashes, nothing left to count.
Wait,can you see them?
No labels, no covers, no tags around their necks.
Tell your mother you made new friends.
But carefully hide- Us, The demons inside.
Joy, Hope, Rain
so many I simply lost count again.
But time withered.
I buried THEM alive and now they're knocking at my door.
See
Rain leaves and Joy is sad,
I turn to Hope with all I have,
And then Hope puts a number on me..Second best.
And I couldn't even listen to the rest.
First would have scared me more.
It wasn't the position, it was simply the list or the score.
It pestered me, it shouldn't have, but I am sorry I lost control.
The silliest shadows, are now so big.
REGRESSION- and I took you along with it.
It wasn't what I said, was it?
Maybe the way I said it ,
maybe when I said it.
But it was me,
I dragged you along with me,
And I am terribly sorry.
I hope I didn't hurt you bad, I hope you choose to stay.
But if I'm toxic, better still just run away.
Someone asked me to remember that things pass, and the farther they go,the smaller they get.
So I'll simply keep hoping-
I hope when tomorrow comes- you lose sadness and I lose count.
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