Intangible
Near yet far. A quote said to a star-crossed love, Those wishin' on a shooting star, Never a sad ending to a jive, Now for those people just like a sparrow, Living in a transparent isolation, Bottling the scars beneath the fired arrow, In a thuderous and silent desolation, Wishin' too they could escape, Because the hole in there is do deep, their heart aches, Once bitten, twice hurt, I thought I wouldn't be but here I am in the dirt, But the feeling inside isn't enough, As people could only notice the surface, So once again they dream in sleep, They dream during the day, filling the hole that looks shallow yet deep, Maybe one day they could get away, Hopefully that would be one day. -PjS
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Sharun
@alvahmara the last two paras were really awesome
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I must say, I'm impressed!
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Thank you!!!!!!
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