forever.
When you lose someone who is your entire universe Be it friend or lover Then it hits you. The chances you didn't take. the things you didn't say the things you didn't do the love you forgot to show. The truth is You may think you have forever. But you don't. You never do.
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deadone
Please keep my heart with u .... as these word of yours tore it away from my chest. I have no words
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2018-09-27 13:25:15
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beccabuchmann
@deadone Aw❤ This is the 3rd poem i have ever written. Like ever. In my life. So I'm happy you liked it😅❤
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2018-09-27 13:26:45
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deadone
@beccabuchmann ur journey is a bang that will result in a beautiful and talented young writer who can move even the hardest of hearts. Best of luck.
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