La dernière danse
purple_ninja_dragon
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Elle semble sourire Sa tête, tournée vers les oiseaux. Il y'a peu on l'entendait rire Tout lui semblait si beau. Elle entend comme des murmures Qui s'amenuisent jusqu'à ce que le silence perdure. Elle est perdue dans ses pensées. Elle ne peut plus danser. Dans son tutu rosé rouge, Ses yeux deviennent lourds Une voiture s'est stationnée, Elle vient de la percuter.
2020-10-14 15:38:41
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KAYSEE
Oh... C'est si triste Mais tu écris divinement bien ^^
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2020-10-29 16:50:30
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purple_ninja_dragon
@KAYSEE Merci ça fait plaisir à lire ^^
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2020-10-29 17:50:38
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Luna Gerta
Oh... Les mots sont justes et sonnent bien, et malgré le triste évènement que tu relates on a l'impression que les vers sont légers... comme une danseuse ;)
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2020-11-13 20:50:36
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