I thought ..
Sp Sp
'I thought this is my world ' I made my world so sweet, and I had dreams of you and me together I thought we would make it well but you gave me a reason to dwell the love and that longing was a lie you had no reason to tell me why you left me suddenly and went away leaving with not a word to say I ask why you did this with me why you made my life a hell I can't imagine being in love ever because I have a broken heart forever so lost in not feeling so good, and I don't want to love anymore! This is the end of road!
2020-06-21 19:02:13
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Valour And Faith
Well penned sir . Beautiful word power 👏👏👏👏👏
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2020-06-21 19:05:19
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@Valour And Faith thank you🙂🙂😊
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2020-06-21 19:05:49
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Valour And Faith
@Sp Sp Most welcome sir 😊
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Those moments of love The day when you went really far. The rain !! You have never realized
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