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I love you (Part two)
I love you
When you say it what do you feel?
So intimate we can be
You saying it back makes me feel so high
Can't we stay in that place of love?
Where nothing is wrong and everything's right
When I write these words I fall deeper in love again with you
I've never been so in love
Never admired someone so much
I just wanna see us grow together and care for one another
I love you
Seeing you smile at me, laugh with me and go out with me
Those are the things that make me so happy to be with you
Be with me too, do new things
Experience real love with me
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I love you
(I'm going to make another part of this soon) enjoy.
I love you is something more than just that
To explain love you'd have to have trust
If there's no trust then there's most certainly going to be a hard time loving
Love isn't easy and all those cheesy movies
Love is hard work, even if you're tired
Love is putting them as a priority, sometimes even before yourself
And it's crazy, love can hurt you; leave you guessing and questioning what's to come
Love can forgive, love can resent and sin
But to begin this love everyone seems to want so much, you have to love yourself first
That's the hardest part; to love what you look at in the mirror
To truly see your flaws before another's
And to grow from there
That's something that can not only help you but your soon to be love
You have to believe in yourself
Give yourself a chance to love itself back
And, then I believe love will come easier
That doesn't mean there won't be any problems, no matter what we do there will always be problems
Remember that love doesn't try and change you
It doesn't make you feel alone
It's supposed to make you feel less alone
Like this one person understands everything about you
They know the flaws, you know there's
And yet their still here to care
To grow together is to love truly
Improve yourself, know the worth you have
Love unconditionally because you never know when that love is going to leave
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You're losing me
You're losing me soon
I've done too much to you as you've done to me
I'm losing touch with myself
Can't help but think it's all my fault
Don't worry I'll be fine for now but keep in mind that I'll always remember the fights
The days we chose to have no compromise
It's killing me to just see my heart break in front of your face like this
I'm so pissed I feel like I can't get out of this mindset unless you change
I want to stay, believe me I do
But staying is only going to hurt me now
You're just going to have to let me drown
I won't make it easier
I won't believe a word you say
I'm tired of losing to a game that I've already played
Make it easier on us and just trust that I know what's best
I promise I wouldn't put you in a place you wouldn't want to be
Or at least I tried to not have that happen to you
If I ever did make you feel something other than love I'm truly sorry for that pain I caused
I know you're flawed, so am I
But we need to find a solution
Something, quick.. Please
I don't know how much more I can take
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I'm happy to say all my wishes came true
You came to my rescue and for that I am forever thankful
God I'm so grateful to have such a wonderful person in my life
You're my best friend and my love
You always keep me flying up above the clouds somehow without doing a thing
Telling you I think we are just meant to be
I feel I've just become calmer, like I can breathe finally..
Finally..knowing that this is something you don't get to feel often, I want to take a chance with it
Run wild with it and just scream I love you
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I guess I'm just a mess
I confess to you that everything I'm thinking is making it hard to breathe
it's making it easier to see that I feel much worse than I thought I did
Getting these words out, I'm trying to explain to you how I feel inside
I've been holding it in not even realizing it
No, I don't want to die
No, I don't want to hide away and cry about it
I want to laugh about it, forget about it like others can do
I'm not perfect but I could learn to cope
And I don't know how to climb this steep hill but I could really use a rope right now
If you could just see that all I need is support, all I need is just somebody to be there
Because I'm finding that I'm not always good with being aware of this empty feeling
If you could just shake me, wake me up and tell me this is not what I really am, maybe it'll come to me soon
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I need you to calm down
Just breathe, walk around and look at the clear sky up above you
This sky has rained many times too
I'm sure you've seen the sidewalks have their own flaws as well, cracks in it and grass from the dirt ground on the other side
Focus on the ceiling of your room, the little bumps seeming to call out whatever you can make of it
That's what this is;
Listen- The shaking feeling you have in your body, the control you feel you don't have..
You do. You can make what you want of it
say you hate your body, your face, and the way your food starts to taste bitter
You're quicker to point out the negative than the positive and I wonder what made it like this?
What made you think everything was a waste of time, what made you think you became a waste of space? Because your not. You're not just a person who has to survive
So stop letting your life go by like a roll of film in front of you
You're going to regret watching every little opportunity go by
Life can be gone in a blink of eye so why not try and make it worth while?
Why not tell yourself it's okay to have your flaws, your doubts but it's not okay to let those things make you suffer.
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Writing poetry isn't how you think it may be..
When you hear about poetry what do you think of? Do you think of this assumed person that writes in detailing sorrow? Do you think of what it means to be a poet? what poets write about usually? I have found that a similarity between most poems I've read are they all seem to push out something that sounds like this: "Her hair was as red as her anger in her mind and her expression was as cold as ice could be."
While there's nothing wrong with writing poetry this way, I want others who maybe are unaware or are barely starting to write to know that's it not just that. It's not just writing in metaphors and rhyming. Poetry is what you feel and if you don't feel like doing the usual, then don't. Write about your daily chores or your opinion on the color purple if you really want to. Art is subjective, what could be perceived as boring could also be seen as entertaining.
My point here being that poetry isn't what many think it may be. To summarize, make it what you want it to be and let your audience see the picture you're trying to create in whatever way you decide to describe it.
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