MENTAL BREAKDXWN
CVLD BLVVDED
THESE DÁYS I'VE BEEN CONSUMED WITH RAGE, SO YOU SHOULD LEAVE OR RUN AWAY, EVEN I DON'T KNOW WHAT'S GOING ON NOW IN MY BRAIN, I CAN DO ANYTHING WHEN I'M WITH A KNIFE INSANE, I WARNED YOU, IN A SECOND I WILL BE A KILLIN' COMBINE, I'LL HURT YOU IF YOU AIN'T RESPOND TO THE FUCKING WORDS I SAID, I BEG YOU JUST LEAVE ME ALONE AND KEEP YOUR INNOCENT LIFE, DON'T DISAPPOINT ME, TAKE THE RIGHT STEP, YOU DON'T WAN' BE ON THE KNIFE EDGE I received too much pain, I think now it's my turn, They put evil in my veins, they will get what's deserved, No time to play saints, you're already a corpse, I wan' throw off the chains, this ain't desire but thirst, NOTHING WILL STOP ME FROM FILLING THE BLOODBATH, HUNTING FOR WORMS, DISABLING FEELINGS COLD BLOODED VEINS, LEAN DOWN TO THE FLOOR I SEE A BLOOD TRAIL, I HAVEN'T DRUNK BLOOD IN MONTHS, MY SKIN TURNED PALE IT SEEMS I JUST HAD A MENTAL BREAKDOWN. JUST A MOMENT AGO...
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JENOVA JACKSON CHASE
Ah nice. But I think there's an error in the 10 th line ... 'Ain't' doesn't go with respond... I think 'don't' is the correct word to be used and if you wanna use ain't then you have to change respond to 'responding'. Heh 🎉🎉🎉.
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2021-05-07 14:33:56
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the "ain't" replaces "do not". So I don't think I should change 'respond' to 'respondin'. Like 'dont responding' isn't correct. There should be 'arent responding' or something like that, you got me?
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