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A tear slipped down her cheek As she cracked open her favorite book. When she looked up, Cotton candy looking trees towered over her. The bees were buzzing. The breeze was singing her own unique song. The tiny ants on the ground were busy moving bread crumbs. The squirrels were burring their acorns. Even the clouds seemed to be smiling down at her. "Chelsie!" Her mother called. A tear slipped down her cheek, As she snapped back into reality And rushed downstairs.
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STELLA RAYMOND
This is a nice one! 😊 But there are some spelling errors dear... In the first line it should be TEAR and not YEAR...... and In the last paragraph, second line, it should be TEAR and not TEAT.
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@STELLA RAYMOND tysm😅
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